Tuesday, 6 May 2014

Reflection for both Drama and Documentary


CMP Project
The processes used to create the documentary

In the documentary project I was sound recordist and camera operator. My initial role was sound editor, however due to circumstances I had no opportunities to edit sound. This module enabled me to develop my communication and team skills.

Lecturers initially got us creatively thinking by showcasing experimental productions such as Pockets, Skateizan, Eric’s Secrets and The Archive. These films focused on a particular subject and provided interesting information. The structure of the films segmented information to allow the audience digest key information and to keep the audience interested. The key to the documentaries was to not overwhelm audience with information, but to present information in a diegetic format that is aesthetically pleasing.

Following these showcases and seminar analyses, we needed to liaise with other students of the course to identify each other targets and methods of achieving them. My personal target was to develop my experience in the sound field. Though this proved difficult from time to time as students hold different commitments and are in different circumstances, the majority of students managed to cope and find groups to work in. The group I joined was founded based on our interests. We all had different aims and skills we wanted to develop, specific roles would allow us to develop these roles.

Another skill that I developed whilst in this production was idea development, this group had many ideas, some that would conflict with each other. We discussed for weeks the idea we would like to follow and some of our ideas when presented didn’t appeal as much as we thought it would. Our final idea, which me and Emily had sourced out almost at the same time seemed to be the most agreeable and interesting of the batch. This did not mean we would completely dissipate our previous ideas. As a group, we took the most outstanding and complimentary thoughts from our previous ideas and used them to assist bringing our final idea to fruition. This meant that everyone, even if not directly got to contribute in some way or another. By this time, we had just had Marcus join and we brought him up to speed with the progress of our idea.

In my opinion, too much time was spent on the idea of the project and not on the pre-production. This is debatably wrong as the idea development would fall under pre-production, however I do feel too much time was centred on the idea and this led to gaps in other segments of pre-production.

I had watched a few films to analyse how sound contributed and sound techniques that were deployed to produce specific reactions from the audience. One is the use of atmos to create a naturalistic scene. Others included the build up to a climax or change.

The production experience was incredible, on the first day of arriving in Liverpool we met with manager and coach of LHFC to negotiate terms of our production. We (Emily) communicated in such a way that both parties found beneficial factors from the end product.

Our documentary was aimed at people who could relate to the interviewees of the documentary. This means anybody who had been threatened or experience homelessness. Our secondary audience was the people who are still homeless, this would be people who fall below F on the socio economic scale. Our tertiary audience are football lovers and people who hold football as an interest. This documentary would serve as an inspiring story to enjoy hearing about football.

The finished piece reaches its goals. We wanted a documentary that provided key information about the homeless football club. The documentary was well received by our peers and the football club were happy with the end result.

The pros are that the group came together and completed a product we were all happy with. We worked to each other’s strengths and if there were any concerns, a member of the team would communicate it over to the rest of the team to attempt to resolve the problem as soon as possible. The days of production went well as we travelled to different locations to interview different participants that had come forward. The film is shot and looks really nice and pleasing to the viewers.

The cons are the production took a little while to get onto its feet. That time could have been spent getting in contact with more people in relation to the subject to create a more objective view. Once I had been away for a little while the crew had stopped communicating regularly to keep myself up to date with what was going on, so I was unaware of the progress of the production. Some ideas at the beginning were pushed too hard and I found previous declined ideas were being reinvented to make them acceptable. The sound editing could have been a lot better on the end product, I fear less adherence was made for it once I had left, even though there was more than one sound editor.

Along the course of this production I developed my skills into researching. Being given limited amount of time to find a subject that fits the assignment criteria and brief, forced the group into a situation that require ourselves to deploy effective search techniques to find a suitable subject. This included

The processes used to create the drama

Creating groups for this project proved to be the most difficult. I had personally noticed that people had started creating circles on the course and this made it hard for people who were not part of a circle. Personally I was not part of any circle, I was comfortable around the people I had worked with previously, but I had not created a social circle.

I started to ask around to see who wasn’t in a group and it seemed only the people who people found most difficult to work with before were free to work with. This was a similar scenario for the CMP Production Skills module. Out of sheer luck I managed to locate a few students who were looking for group members.

The first group meeting I had missed, because I had a presentation for the CMP Production Skills module, this left me at a disadvantage at idea development as an idea had been decided in this meeting. The meeting that I met the whole group was catch up for myself, as I needed to understand the concept of the idea. This proved to be very difficult. I was confused by the explanation of the idea and the concept. After a few group meetings I finally managed to get on the same page as other group members.

Having a session with floor plans helped me slightly. The production session was quite useful, I got to see an actor. The main problem was the communication. Relating back to what I was saying about social circles on the course, this only made it tense to communicate with people on the course in seminars and workshops. Sometimes people would want to discuss ideas and other days they would not or the feeling of segregation would slip in. This made the workshop session beyond awkward and indigestible, in the end I requested to leave. The post-production follow workshop really helped. I got to edit the recorded footage from the day with the actor and the main objective was to create a sequence that didn’t emphasise the problems that happened in production. It was very difficult as I faced different problems such as: the actor saying the wrong lines or the white balance being incorrectly set. Since there was no ADR or re-recordings of takes the sound limited the sequence. In the end I decided to edit around the sound also to make the sequence fit. I inserted pans to support position and darkened the majority of the shot to conceal unnecessary objects.

As I wasn’t editor for this project it was less useful in comparison to the actual editor, however it did aid me to picturing how the drama could look. The sound editing helped me to understand how the sound editor could piece together the sound. Certain parts of the sequence I would draw upon sounds from other clips of captured footage to make it flow smoother.

Once the group had drafted a first draft script and met actors this really helped. The group hadn’t planned on using the actors from the seminar prior to it, however it seemed that they were most suited for what we required. The actor who read our voice over dialogue seemed more than willing to feature in our film so we gave her the role. We got the other actors to act the argument scene that would feature in the film and it worked out really well. We offered the male actor the role as we needed an actor for the scene, however the main character is who he would have an argument so we did not require the remaining actor.

Our schedule was quite loose, most of the production did not require definite dates as we had access to most of the locations and facilities we required. Shooting on the bus required us to get in contact with the bus provider and ask for clearance. No contact was made and the group had just randomly set up on a bus we had got on, then recorded. I recorded atmos from the bus we had boarded. The sound editor had not outlined any specific sounds they had wanted, so I thought to record anything that peaked my interest and would be an asset to the production.

One difficulty we had with this production was finding a pole dancer who could act. The university has a pole dancer society luckily and members of group were getting contact with people from the society, however when the days of production approached, the reliability of the pole dancers decreased and eventually we had to use one of the crew. She was a pole dancer and actor so it worked, however without her in the group, this would have been a hard project to commit too.

The pole dancing studio and the living room were easily accessible. Amy was a part of the society, so this worked in our favour and we decorated Izzy’s living room to get the look we desired. Whilst sound recording in the pole dancing studio, I had thoughts about alternative ways recording the sound of pole dancing. One idea that came to was using the hydrophone with an end piece whilst Amy was performing on the pole. We only recorded once in the pole dancing studio, so unfortunately I did not get to experiment with this idea.

The last hiccup I personally made was with the recording of the monologue, I had connected the shotgun microphone to Marrantz recorder, however had forgotten to set it to the microphone. This meant that the majority of the recording I made were in stereo and only a few were in mono.

To conclude, I have enjoyed creating this product, from the current progress of the rough draft, not enough adherences have been paid to the sound. The planning for sound was to eliminate it, which left the group at a disadvantage. The powerful use of silence will most likely not be utilised. The film looks nice so far and I believe the final cut will be nice. Communication was pretty poor, our main point of communication was Facebook and though the majority of society uses it today, it still isn’t professional or completely reliable. Important information was either received late or received at all, because of Facebook. The editor has not kept the group up to date with edit and as I write this, I have still not seen the final edit.

6/5 Final Meeting

Today we the group met for the last time to check the final edit, it needed some final adjustments and is now complete

Ty

Monday, 5 May 2014

Professional Documentation

Script

                      The Pole
                    Screenplay by
                   Andrew Espley
 An idea developed by Isabel Wells, Amy Silk, Tyreece
Thomas, Andrew Espley, Callum Petit and Leanne Perry
INT. BUS. EARLY EVENING
A girl, LUCY (19), is sitting on a bus, looking a bit
miserable. She looks out of the rain-streaked window. The
sounds of the bus and the city fade a little, and we hear,
like it’s being said in a documentary interview:
                    LUCY (V.O)
          Erm, I don’t really know what to
say really. It’s been my life for... wow, I don’t know. A long time now. I don’t know how to describe it.
We see flashes over her voice:
INT. STUDIO. EVENING.
A HAND TOUCHING A POLE, CLOSE UP.
INT. LIVING ROOM. EVENING.
LUCY ARGUING WITH SOMEONE, SILENT.
EXT. CITY STREET. EARLY EVENING
Lucy gets off the bus, lights up a cigaretter and starts
walking. She knows where she’s going, and she still looks
down.
                    LUCY (V.O CONT)
          I guess it started for me at
school. I’d never get any interest from guys, or anything like that. Being constantly overlooked was horrible - and I know it may seem shallow to say it, but all I wanted was for some guys to look at me. In that way, you know.
We see more flashes throughout:
MORE ARGUING, WITH BOYFRIEND?
CLOSE UPS OF LEGS/ARMS MOVING ABOUT A POLE
                    LUCY (V.O CONT)
          I’d sit in class watching them
          all stare at all the plastic
          girls with their fake tans and
          shit. Made me hate ’em. Still do
          hate girls like that.
Lucy approaches a building, walks through the doors and
into it.
We see more flashes of the above.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
2.
                    LUCY (V.O CONT)
          But it was jealousy more than
          anything else. If I could look
          like them - look like them and
          get guys looking at me... Well
          you get me. My life hasn’t been
          some dead hard sad case though. I
          haven’t got a sob story I can
          tell you. We weren’t exactly well
          off but we were alright - my
          family, I mean. I had friends.
          They were alright.
INT. STUDIO. EVENING.
Lucy walks into a room and we see a pole - the studio. She
approaches the pole and we see the same shot from the
first flash - the HAND TOUCHING A POLE.
                    LUCY (V.O CONT)
          I can’t remember exactly when it
          was that I started wanting to do
          this - get on stage, and
          everything. I think I was 17 when
          I started having classes. I saw
          classes, and then I saw some
          girls on Facebook that did it, so
          I went along. It was alright. I
          felt good. The better I got, the
          more, you know, confident I felt.
          I felt comfortable looking the
          way I did.
Lucy prepares - getting dressed/ready to practice.
We see more flashes of the argument.
                    LUCY (V.O CONT)
          Then I went some club with some
          lads- a strip club, you know.
          Some dirty scrotty little club
          where if you payed ’em £40 they’d
          take you to some room backstage.
          It was horrible, the way the guys
          were acting, you know. But I
          loved it. It reminded me of
          school - the girls who all the
          guys would stare at all day, but
          they were doing something I could
          do. I could get like that, I
          thought. So I asked some girl
          when she came off stage, and she
          got the manager who gave me his
          card.
          I started at that shitty club the
          next week.
(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED: 3.
We see Lucy on the pole - elegant, skilled - moving about
it with ease. In flashes over this, we see the argument
again, but this time it seems to have escalated to a full
on shouting match.
                    LUCY (V.O CONT)
          My friends didn’t like it - the
ones who knew. My boyfriend didn’t like it either. Well... (her voice falters slightly) my ex.
We see the argument ending - the boyfriend slapping Lucy.
He storms out, Lucy screaming angrily after him, and Lucy
sitting on the sofa, sobbing. Then we see a flashback to
Lucy on the bus, upset. (Has she come straight from the
argument?)
                    LUCY (V.O CONT)
          They thought like you do,
probably. That I’m a slag. That I don’t have any respect for myself. You’re wrong though. I’d be there, and... I can’t put it into words, how I felt- on the pole, with the guys all staring and cheering and- and... wanting me. I felt better than I ever have.
Lucy is off the pole now, looking like she did on the bus.
Deep in thought.
                    LUCY (V.O CONT)
          It’s alright this. I know
          there’ll be people looking at me
          thinking, "Look at that mess" or
          "Look what she’s done to her
          life", you know. But I don’t give
          a shit.
               (laughs again)
Lucy is getting ready - evidently for a night on the pole
- she puts on her shiny high heels.
                    LUCY (V.O CONT)
          I really don’t. I love what I
          do. I’m happy.
INT. BUS. EARLY EVENING
We see Lucy on the bus again - the same shot as earlier.
But this time, she smiles. A reluctant, but genuine,
smile.

Character backstory

CHARACTER NAME: Vicky

AGE 19

APPEARANCE: (to be confirmed by Actor)

  1. What do you know about this character now that s/he doesn’t yet know?
  2. What is this character’s greatest flaw?
  3. What do you know about this character that s/he would never admit?
  4. What is this character’s greatest asset? Her personality, very caring.
  5. If this character could choose a different identity, who would s/he be? This drama is based upon this question; looking at being yourself and wanting to be yourself, Vicky is a young pole dancer that learnt the ways of pole dancing and how it can earn you money, the idea of pole dancing and working in clubs disgraces her and her family however we learn that she cant escape from this as the pole gives her escapism of the trouble that her career causes through her family life, with the way Vicky see’s herself and her job if purely based upon the dancing side and how she wants to pursue her dancing career.
  6. What music does this character sing to when no one else is around? Her favourite music is often small bands that are often not what you expect from this character, giving herself an escapism through the music she listens to. (Lana Del Rey)
  7. In what or whom does this character have the greatest faith? She has her greatest faith in herself, she feels that most people have let her down so she has always provided everything for herself, an example being of her career.
  8. What is this character’s favourite movie? The Notebook, because she hopes to find the love that the two main characters create.
  9. Does this character have a favourite article of clothing? Favourite shoes? Heels (Dancing)
  10. Does this character have a vice? Name it.
  11. Name this character’s favourite person (living or dead). Her grandma (Dead), because she always supported her.
  12. What is this character’s secret wish? To become a professional dancer.
  13. What is this character’s proudest achievement? Earning her own money.
  14. Describe this character’s most embarrassing moment. Her parents finding out that she works as a pole dancer.
  15. What is this character’s deepest regret? Working in a strip bar because they way people view strip bars.
  16. What is this character’s greatest fear?
  17. Describe this character’s most devastating moment.
  18. What is this character’s greatest achievement?
  19. What is this character’s greatest hope?
  20. Does this character have an obsession? Name it.
  21. What is this character’s greatest disappointment?
  22. What is this character’s worst nightmare?
  23. Whom does this character most wish to please? Why?
  24. Describe this character’s mother.
  25. Describe this character’s father.
  26. If s/he had to choose, with whom would this character prefer to live?
  27. Where does this character fall in birth order? What effect does this have?
  28. Describe this character’s siblings or other close relatives.
  29. Describe this character’s bedroom. Include three cherished items.
  30. What is this character’s birth date? How does this character manifest traits of his/her astrological sign?
  31. If this character had to live in seclusion for six months, what six items would s/he bring?
  32. Why is this character angry?
  33. What calms this character?
  34. Describe a recurring dream or nightmare this character might have.
  35. List the choices (not circumstances) that led this character to his/her current predicament.
  36. List the circumstances over which this character has no control.
  37. What wakes this character in the middle of the night?
  38. How would a stranger describe this character?
  39. What does this character resolve to do differently every morning?
  40. Who depends on this character? Why?
  41. If this character knew s/he had exactly one month to live, what would s/he do?
  42. How would a dear friend or relative describe this character?
  43. What is this character’s most noticeable physical attribute?
  44. What is this character hiding from him/herself?
  45. Write one additional thing about your character.
Treatment Sheet

















Synopsis:
Our idea is to create a drama to showcase a pole dancer’s life. A monologue will be used to document her life, however we will create an inciting incident that will provide a more dramatic tone to the film.
The girl is a pole dancer and her back story is how she ends up as a pole dancing, we found inspiration and influence from Sign Language (2010). We will shoot it using a DSLR camera because we feel that it gives it more of an artist approach rather a static feel – we want the imagery to feel poetic and beautiful, rather than a more traditional documentary style like Sign Language. We will use no diegetic dialogue, with the story coming from a narrative monologue, looking at her journey of what she does for a living, how her life has led to this and if an why she enjoys it. We intend on creating a respectful (we don’t want to criticise the art of pole dancing), interesting but hard hitting story.

Inspiration

Equipment
Canon DSLR
Shotgun Mic
Marrantz

Technical Requirements:
The cinematography will be a big part of this project making sure the shots aren’t shown in a documentary style, using close ups and interesting angles to show the subject matter also looking at inspiration from ‘Sign Language’. We plan on filming with a DSLR to create a more artistic, softer feel rather than a static feel which we feel the canon fx 100 would create.

Cast:
We plan on having one main character here are some basic information we will be looking for within our character persona.
Gender – female
Age – 18-22
Personality – little rough round the edges, hard working,
Backstory – grown up living in a rough area with scrapping by with her mother, often being bullied, struggling through her teenage life, finds happiness in pole dancing as a hobby but soon learns the money involved in working in a strip club which develops the story showing more deeper subject, we follow her journey and how she deals with life.
We will have extras within the studio filming and the public transport filming however these extras will not add to the story.

Crew:
Isabel Wells – Director
Callum Petitt – Producer
Andrew Espley – Camera
Tyrese Thomas – Sound Recordist
Amy Silk – Editor
Leanne Perry – Sound Editor